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Reveal
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net
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Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 01:20:17 PM in AEST
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My secrets
Are safe
Unlike my steps
Same traps
I keep falling into
Time
Is no heal
Nothing changes
Except the pain
Persists
And nests in my brain
The walk
Steps and stride
Hard though it seems
I advance
Towards a night
Left blank
My goals
They wont reveal themselves
No matter what
I do
Leave
And forget this place
The memories
Will part with you
Fun clouds your presence
And luck favors you
But still
The real is merciless
And hurting
Is permanent
So they say
The nothingness
For whenever I need them
I face loneliness
Caress my cheek
And say your last goodbyes
For I've heard theyre breaking us down
For good
Remember
These days
And forget
Remember
The fall
And escape
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Re: Reveal
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 10:41:52 PM AEST
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Interesting concept you have written within this verse. I like.Good work,
Michelle |
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Re: Reveal
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by BornReckless on
Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 11:02:28 AM AEST
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| Interstingly put. |
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Re: Reveal
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by JuniorWise on
Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 03:02:37 PM AEST
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| The best part was the first few lines. That was good |
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