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Blac and White
Contributed by
windowguy
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Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 11:31:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Black Kiss
No Love;
White Hand
No Glove.
Black Rose
No Thorn;
White Tear
Not Born.
Black Tie
No Life;
White Face
No Wife.
Now Black,
No Light;
White Lies
Not Right.
Now White,
Not Black;
Truth lives
Hope back.
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2009-05-13 23:31:40]
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Re: Blac and White
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by screwge on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 03:42:26 PM AEST
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| The almost complete dearth of verbs and elimination of article adjectives inject this poem with a bit of caveman savvy. It shows the reader how so few words can make a compelling statement. |
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