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Love making
Contributed by
boopa0213
on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She opened up here sunset
and with a smile invited me in.
I penetrated her brightness
and felt us move in unison.
She kissed me softly
with the fluffiness of spring clouds.
With the brightness of a full moon
she lets me know she likes it, with a smile.
With the summer night breeze
she whispers softly in my ear.
The over wetness of her ocean
lets me know she is almost there.
The tears of rain drops
is because she is doing this with her heart.
Between the twinkles of the star light
I see our bodies move passionately in the dark
With the rising of the sun
we both awake to a new day.
I thank God for her love
and how she shares it with me this way.
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boopa0213
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2003-03-27 03:05:00]
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Re: Love making
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 09:30:06 AM AEST
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beautifully written, romantic, well done
Sharon |
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Re: Love making
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by frozensuicide on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 07:23:52 PM AEST
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| this is very romantic and pretty. i like it. |
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