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Your Blue Summer
Contributed by
HonestInk
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Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 03:03:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sun plays across your blues,
giving me my own summer
far away from the hot breeze.
A half-smile holds a secret,
while those hands steal my heart
straight from my sleeve.
Strong arms huddle around me,
I feel safe when I'm with you
away from the summer heat.
But now I feel the burn,
blue flames have new meaning
as they scorch what's destroyed.
I had summer during winter,
but not even my thickest sweater
could keep me warm.
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HonestInk
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2009-05-15 15:03:42]
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Re: Your Blue Summer
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by freckle on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 03:28:28 PM AEST
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Very good write! I love your imagery. I feel like the poem was heading in one direction and then took a sudden turn...that may be how the relationship played out.
Good write though...I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Thanks again for sharing!
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