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Pregnant Thoughts
Contributed by
windowguy
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Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 11:18:38 PM in AEST
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Sometimes you cant avoid
Contracting this good disease,
It invades the whole body
But gets better by degrees!
Sometimes the hottest fever
Burns an anxious brow
Until the newest creation
Comes to birth somehow.
Yet, oh what great joy
When, at last it comes to life;
So emotional a release that
You can cut the air with a knife.
From the womb of the mind
Those fertile seeds of thought
Grew, and did truly flourish
From nothing, to such import
That, now you are so proud
To be the Father of a child;
A result of inner turmoil
From one so meek and mild.
How pleased you will be
After such sweat and tears,
To look at it time and again
Over many joyful years.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2009-05-15 23:18:38]
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Re: Pregnant Thoughts
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 11:52:31 PM AEST
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| Great writing! I love how your poem is kind of like the opposite of the one I just submitted. Yours seems to be giving birth to a thought, while mine is about a thought dying before even entering one's consciousness. I love your imagery! Great job! |
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Re: Pregnant Thoughts
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 05:12:58 AM AEST
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Very creative thinking and creative writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Pregnant Thoughts
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 02:58:16 PM AEST
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| Rhythmic, syllabic...emotional. I really like it. |
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