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Torturous Tears
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 05:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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a salt of pain drips;
blood streams down my green, sad eyes.
Tears are the soul's rain
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-05-16 17:00:41]
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Re: Torturous Tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 07:33:23 PM AEST
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What a painful haiku. Your words strike the soul with
heart breaking precision. This is very emotive. Sorry for
your pain, but even within tears, the inspiration can be
so overwhelming and magnificent.
Great post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Torturous Tears
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by musicrox13 on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 08:48:59 PM AEST
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| whoa i can realte. great work!! |
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Re: Torturous Tears
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 10:41:13 PM AEST
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This is simply remarkable dear,
It's so graphic I can see it in my mind's eye
you seem so near.
Tears cleanse the soul
and the heart too.
I hope writing this did that for you!
Dry your tears and write another miracle.
Warm love
consue |
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