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Found You
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 09:20:15 AM in AEST
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Run, dont walk
Into my open arms
Feel and touch
This love is never lost
Think, not hard
Of the elusive moment
Give and take
And you will always own it
Succumb, dont fight
If you taste the sweetness
Awake tonight
Prey on my weakness
Support, dont let go
And you become statuesque
Alone, no more
This stranger has found his princess
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jyssvw22
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2009-05-19 09:20:15]
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Re: Found You
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by MoonlightKiss on
Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 09:24:12 AM AEST
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| awww this was so sweet |
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Re: Found You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 07:18:06 AM AEST
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Damn jyss! This was so extraordinary. Moreso because it is unlike most of
your work. I was captivated by the first two lines. Sighed into captivity
by the enchantment of this piece. And though the romantic overtones
threaten to take me away, there is some subtle and sage advice in this as well.
Perfectly worded, as usual. Great work, jyss!
~ Breezy
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Re: Found You
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by Elipsis on
Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 12:01:17 PM AEST
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| I think this is a great poem! Deep, open, inspirational... :) |
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Re: Found You
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 10:46:09 AM AEST
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| Simple, straightforward, but you don't skimp on the message. It seems as though the princess is just out of your grasp, yet you know it's meant to be. |
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