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New Deal
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deadwriter
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Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 06:22:24 PM in AEST
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New Deal
I spent my days down in the dumps
My life was in a constant slump
I dared not venture beyond the space in my room
The writes I turned out were smothered with doom and gloom
One day as pictures kept appearing on my wall
In particular one stood out from them all
I absorbed it deep into my mind
Knowing that someone special I did find
I studied how the sun highlighted the curves of your face
I looked longer because I sensed a special kind of grace
Then came the day I finally spoke to you
I was so unsure of what to say or do
You shared that special grace with me
I knew right then friends we were meant to be
Now I spend my days singing a new tune
With a spring in my step, I know I will see you online soon
Deadwriter
05/11/2009
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Re: New Deal
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 06:33:27 PM AEST
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A lovely and positive write, my friend....
Wish I could be as positive as you are at the moment....
Missed your writes....and you...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: New Deal
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st May 2009 @ 10:57:18 AM AEST
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This is a very postive write. It is a true miracle when at times people over the net can become closer to us than we realized, even in distance. I loved this poem but of course I love all of your poetry!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: New Deal
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st May 2009 @ 02:25:05 PM AEST
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| Isn't it amazing how just one person can change our lives? |
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Re: New Deal
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 11:34:07 AM AEST
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Oh, how I adore this! This flows with a beautiful sentiment and
enormous optimism. I am happy to see a lightness in your words
again, my friend. There is a softness in this write that stands out
as a brilliant light. If only everyone could have an inspiring friend
(or two) to hold us when we are too weary to hold ourselves. To
give us moments to anticipate with a happiness such as yours. ^_^
Beautiful post.
~ Breezy
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Re: New Deal
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 06:30:43 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem. Great Job! |
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