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Almost
Contributed by
Spike
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Thursday, 21st May 2009 @ 05:24:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Its a beautiful madness
but it cant last;
this rapid onset of passion,
deluding the senses into happiness
Its a sweet dream
but Ill wake soon;
into the bright truth of daylight,
grinning like an idiot
Such a delirious state
where all things are possible;
yes its a gorgeous insanity,
but its had its time
(almost)
Copyright ©
Spike
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2009-05-21 05:24:10]
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Re: Almost
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by thumper on
Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 11:47:47 PM AEST
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AWWWW! So wistful. I wish I had dreams like this. Waking, grinning like an idiot. lol Nice poem. I enjoyed reading this. Good write, Spike. Keep it up!
Peace to ya,
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: Almost
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by elle on
Sunday, 31st May 2009 @ 07:08:48 PM AEST
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Well, Spike, I believe this describes me. Grinning, delirious, indeed. I'm convinced, at this point
in time, that I am simply in love with love. That splendid feeling that consumes & fills the heart
with joy at the same time. & so I've learned to love whoever, whatever up close & more importantly
from a distance. This brings me great peace. Peace to you. elle |
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