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PleasureFullFilling
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A pleasurefull feeling
of cutting my vein
Life is fullfilling
when you haven't a name
I'll do the killing
yes I take the blame
I find this thrilling
do you find it the same?
That someone is willing
to admit their insane
Well I'm sick of dealing
with this hurt and this pain
So down I am knealing
for I have been slain
I murdered myself how can this be
is this a dream or reality
This is the end he whispered to me
forever you'll rest in purgatory
Heaven or Hell I wont get to see
but I'm off this earth and I'm finally free
One simple pain
of ending my life
Had nothing to gain
but scars from a knife
I toss out my fame
set my life aside
A bullet in brain
is the end of my ride
Forget my whole name
for now I have died
Murdered myself how can this be
is this a dream or reality
This is the end he whispered to me
Forever you rest in purgatory
Heaven or Hell I don't get to see
But I'm off this earth and I'm finally free
A pleasurefull feeling
of slipping away
Life is fullfilling
when you don't have to stay
If you do the killing
it all ends just the same
As long as your willing
to cut your own vein
Its sort of like stealing
or cheating the game
of the hand GOD is dealing
You have put him to shame
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-03-27 10:35:00]
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Re: PleasureFullFilling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:43:29 AM AEST
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This is really creepy but so well written. 10/10.... Well, the max you can give on this site is a 5 and that is what I am gonna give it!!
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Re: PleasureFullFilling
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by nightrider on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:52:25 AM AEST
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| amazing write, makes so much sense...its eerily true to me... bravo, keep writing. |
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Re: PleasureFullFilling
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by shelby on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:13:47 PM AEST
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A bit spooky but its well written.
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Re: PleasureFullFilling
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by lil_Jewel on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:07:40 PM AEST
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| WOW!!! This poem is just what I feel and what I try to write, but I can never get it to sound as good as this. Great write. Keep it up. |
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Re: PleasureFullFilling
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by shortgurl2006 on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:26:36 PM AEST
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This is a great poem... that explains just the way I feel... You express yourself well and I wish you the best in life.
~*ShortGurl*~
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