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Cavewoman
Contributed by
Elipsis
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Thursday, 21st May 2009 @ 11:42:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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She walks upon my thoughts like its made of gold
Her heart made of compassion, her emotions never to be told
Hidden away in her concealed cave of sorrow
Shell keep me captivated today and tomorrow
Thoughts running wild are reflected in her rainbow eyes
Not aware that the look she possesses will mesmerize
Unaware that the world around her longs her participation
Outside this cold cave, I wait, in full anticipation
Waiting for the peaceful child to come out and play
Leaving behind the cavewoman, all hurt and fray
Showing the world what they have failed to see
Presenting what shes so graciously shown to me
For what I have seen I cannot start to explain
Behind all that beauty, a series of heartbreak and pain
All my thoughts of happiness and joy have been proven defected
The true meaning, found below the front this angel has perfected.
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Elipsis
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2009-05-21 23:42:28]
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Re: Cavewoman
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 08:35:37 PM AEST
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| Excellent writing! Nice use of imagery. I will have to read more of your poetry. Great job! |
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