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testament to a prodigic ending
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 08:07:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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my deathbed, flaming. . . burns
with each apparent lapse of consciousness
a melodic happenstance of sparks
& the spittle of melting
dripping colour
mediate the paradox
that is existence
tracery. . .
a mind-set vanishing
lost & incapable smoke
offering the fading image
of some textured
lung-thing
choking
coughing
spuing creature
oh, brilliant cruelty
. . . must I be free?
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-05-22 20:07:05]
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Re: testament to a prodigic ending
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 09:12:27 PM AEST
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Morbid and scary with great imagery. This provoked a lot of thought in me ol' brain which also scares me...death...frightening.
As always, another great write from the mind of to the pen of Elle. |
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Re: testament to a prodigic ending
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 10:03:58 AM AEST
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oh elle, this was dark and ripe with passion! Such a glorious write, even
with all it's tragedy. You know, this moved me into believing birth may
be like this. CRASHING into reality. The death of life in the womb and the
beginning of life on Earth. This literally gave me shivers. EXCEPTIONAL writing
hun. You are truly gifted.
~ Breezy
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Re: testament to a prodigic ending
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by venkat on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 02:24:19 AM AEST
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Wow..very dark yet it is great..very artistic..
Dear elle, I have many words in my mind but..
I can't express..I am here to share your feelings. Just lay your head on my shoulder..
..venkat |
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