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Fell Into Abyss
Contributed by
user5684
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Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 12:37:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Email me if you would like to hear it recorded with the music.
Fell into abyss
looking for a spire
looking for a glimpse of something
something to take me higher.
Embracing the darkness,
Let it shield my eyes,
Shield my eyes
To keep me, keep me from the harsh.
To save me, save me from the stark
To hide me, hide me in the dark,.
Come n find me, Im falling, Im falling .
please find me, I thought I was flying
come n find me, Im tryin, Im tryin
please find me, Im falling. , Im falling.
Hope, abandoned
Still tryin to climb the tower
Still looking for that glimpse of something.
nothing ever takes me higher.
I cast myself to fire
ruled by the same desire
take me higher,
higher.
Come n find me, I m falling, Im falling .
please find me, I thought I was flying
come n find me, Im tryin, Im tryin
please find me, Im falling. , Im falling.
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Re: Fell Into Abyss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 11:46:42 AM AEST
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This one would probably work better for me if I could hear the song. So, yeah, please send it to me. I sent an email about the other one so you can use that addy. I don't however find it cliché. I am not always about the lyrics, myself, but more about the mix of them with the rhythm of the tune.
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