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I Wonder
Contributed by
PoetryLeader
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Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 01:14:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Wonder How I live When My Friends Are Dead And Gone
Will My Visions Come True Of Me Leaving Alone
How Will I Get To Heaven When I'm Living In Hell
How I Still Breath And The Rest Of My Kind Fell
Will I Forecome To A Future I'm Fighting Against
How Do I Surivie These Blows And These Hits
How Can I See When I'm Blinded With Insanity
How Can I Love When My Family Was Never Close To Me
I Wonder How I'm Everyone's Light But I'm Stuck In Darkness
How I Wanna Leave This Earth But The Razor Won't Finish This
I Wonder How Come The Good Die Young But Suffer While They Live
How Everyone Just Take But I Have More To Give
How Come EveryWhere I Turn My Head There's No One On My Side
I Wonder How I'm There When They Cry Or When They Want To Die
How Do I Have All These Problems But Was Bless With Talents
How My Eyes are Filled With Tears Of Blood But Still See Hints
I Wonder How You Can Read This And Not Know What I'm Going Through
How Every Negative Thing That I See In My Mind Comes True
I Wonder How I'm Living This Life.....Life Of A Hero!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: I Wonder
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by kye on
Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 04:39:28 AM AEST
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Your poem is a tough one to comment on. It is good but I questioned whether or not to leave a comment - because I felt so much pain radiating from your poem.
I hope that by writing poetry; your inner muse will bring you tranquility. It has helped me greatly.
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