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Spring (Villanelle)
Contributed by
rachelhogan
on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 11:38:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Please dont walk away
The glacier looks so sweet
Dont turn your back on the new day.
The sun is shining so high in the sky
You decided to stay awake
Please dont walk away
The green grass is beckoning you
You said it must be fate
Dont turn your back on the new day.
Look around and notice the light
The old man plays on and on
Please dont walk away.
The flowers are in bloom
The children have escaped
Dont turn your back on the new day.
I chance a glance in your direction
What a day, you are beautiful
Please dont walk away
Dont turn your back on the new day.
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rachelhogan
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2009-05-29 11:38:48]
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Re: Spring (Villanelle)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 04:47:50 PM AEST
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another nice write, good job.
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