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My Favourite Places
Contributed by
windowguy
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Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 11:34:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Theres a hollow in her hand
That needs to be filled with mine
A beach of powder white sand
Where we cheerfully recline
There are two lovely lips
Just waiting for a tender kiss
A cliff top where the wind whips
Up a bracing breeze, sheer bliss
Warm tints nestle within her hair
And seemingly skip with pleasure
A buttercup meadow so rare
Is where we picnic at our leisure
Right in the centre of her chest
Her heart beats a rhythm sublime
Wherever we are, that place is the best
As long as Im with her each time.
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2009-05-29 23:34:54]
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Re: My Favourite Places
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by The_Young_Poet on
Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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| good writing. the rhyme scheme flows well too. i like it :] |
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