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Moonshine
Contributed by
TheSpiritx
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Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 03:12:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to be your moonshine,
but not your alcohol,
because then I would be
the cupid of stupid,
bringing you thoughtlessness
rather than light.
I want to be your perfume,
always there when you need me,
ready to tag along
and ride your beauty,
smelling sweetly.
I want to be the shoelace of your shoes,
responsible for hugging you tight
all day, and sleeping near you
at night.
I want to be the cricket in your room,
chirping and singing for you,
all night long on those nights
when you're feeling blue.
At least it will be distracting, right?
But most important,
I want to be your guy
and I want you
to be my girl,
and together, we'll be more
than the world combined.
Copyright ©
TheSpiritx
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2009-06-01 15:12:43]
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Re: Moonshine
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by screwge on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 03:35:06 PM AEST
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| What an emotive first stanza! I really like the line "bringing you thoughtlessness/ rather than light." |
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