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Cold
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 09:55:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It penetrates
deep into the being
of self unrealized
and daunting to the light.
The steel blade
sinking in deeply
and forsaking the moments
of hushed loves demise.
A wound
seeping profoundly
non healing, unhealthy
a scar to the heart.
Fractured
it lays slayed
wounded and not mended
laying cold on the stone ground.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-06-01 21:55:24]
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Re: Cold
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by Loende on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 10:08:40 PM AEST
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Oh, Shell.....I think I might know what that
"it" you speak of is. I think it's the stone
that use to be my heart. This is a punch
to the gut, and yet, lovely, in it's pain and
simplicity. It spoke volumes to me.
Love,
~d |
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Re: Cold
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by simsalabim on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 10:43:29 PM AEST
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| oh...the horror! |
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Re: Cold
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 11:20:37 PM AEST
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Duh-aaam, Michelle. This is powerful! Very nice imagery and metaphors!
Very Timpressive, uh, I mean imbressive.
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Re: Cold
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 11:22:13 PM AEST
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| D'oh! Meant impressive. |
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Re: Cold
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 12:28:54 AM AEST
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I like it. Makes me think of my friend..not for good reasons but it does
great poem very dark and I like that
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Cold
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 11:15:10 AM AEST
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Oh me girl,
I can remember feeling this way too many times but I made it thru and you will too.
Now their just past that is only a bad memory.
It'll all come out in the wash cycle so hang tuff deary. I have confidence in you that you'll be tried in the fire but come forth as gold.
Luv's ya,
emy |
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Re: Cold
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 04:19:42 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. Powerful language used here. It paints of realistic picture and I can feel the pain within. Truly magical! |
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Re: Cold
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by Cathi on
Thursday, 2nd July 2009 @ 03:16:33 AM AEST
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A very dark and powerful poem. I love the images you use to create a sense of the mood that inspires them.
Cathi |
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