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In The Fire
Contributed by
Eternal_Darkness
on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 01:41:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I cry the tears that always burn me
People touch them and they're cold
Why must I feel?
I don't want this to be real
Please take the pain back
Now through the air I hear their call
Crying out for some restrain
To heal their pain
Or maybe go insane
Mercy is their game
So I will walk through the fire
'Cause now it's said and done
I will walk through the fire
And let it...
The pain I feel is killing me
They don't notice this I know
I hear their cries
I'm free at their demise
i have to face their pain
'Cause I will walk through the fire
I know they'll never learn
I must walk through the fire
And let it...
Now I hear their echoes race
All alone they fear to be
Not ashamed
I always feel the pain
But they can never know
I am trapped in the fire
I can't just turn away
So I will walk through the fire
And let it burn.
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Eternal_Darkness
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Re: In The Fire
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 01:48:45 PM AEST
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The things we do for friends sometimes. This is a thought provoking piece... I like it! Great write!
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Re: In The Fire
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 05:58:44 PM AEST
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I had one friendship once that was just like a trap. Took me a couple years of walking through the fire to finally find the strength to turn and walk away from it. Great poem.
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Re: In The Fire
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:27:54 AM AEST
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| Excellent Write! |
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Re: In The Fire
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by frozensuicide on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:32:39 PM AEST
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| i loved this, i loved the way to described the pain and torment you seem to be going through. it was good. thanks for sharing... i feel that way all the time... i hate it. |
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Re: In The Fire
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 12:40:24 AM AEST
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| All I can really say is "WOW" this was a very moving poem. |
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Re: In The Fire
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by JamesHowlett on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 12:57:00 AM AEST
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| very nice, gave a great picture in my mind |
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Re: In The Fire
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:32:42 AM AEST
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"I must walk through the fire
And let it... "
Nice poem - full of angst and scorching emotion. |
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