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Countdown
Contributed by
anomalei
on
Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 03:15:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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carry the word, heavy on your tongue
some delicious candy morsel -
melt quickly!
taste the center
hanging in the air, exhaling
soft whispers and heavy breathing
not too loud -
stay a secret.
keep it in hand, wherever you go
following, staying close -
don't leave it behind!
a memory forever
always on your mind, a catchy song
a tune you just can't shake,
every thought returns to your anticipation -
we're all the same
i can feel it like water in my lungs,
like a sunburn that just won't fade
straining weights i can't shrug off,
so close, nearly here -
i can't get summer off my mind!
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anomalei
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2009-06-03 15:15:57]
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Re: Countdown
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by elle on
Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 06:47:26 PM AEST
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| summer time, yum. . . nice write. elle |
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Re: Countdown
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by simsalabim on
Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 10:18:16 PM AEST
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| vun two ah hah |
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Re: Countdown
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 10:33:35 AM AEST
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In England, we don't get this thing you call 'summer'. What is it?
-Phil |
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