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Words Can Be Razor Blades
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 09:50:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Am I safe here?
with all the thoughts
that go through my head?
Laughter and soft murmurs.
That's what I need
Something soft to cling to.
Because you tear me to shreds.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-06-05 09:50:40]
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Re: Words Can Be Razor Blades
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 07:43:17 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem. Indeed words are often the deadliest weapons. Nicely written.
--Heidi |
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Re: Words Can Be Razor Blades
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th June 2009 @ 05:31:43 AM AEST
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a very fluid write, well constructed. it was also quite piercing in its delivery, which is appropriate considering the title. good work.
-Phil |
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