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Half a Man
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 12:01:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All these things
lay around me
memories of you
in a silent room
mocking my presence
reminding me
that Im not enough
not for you
not for any girl
half a man
the other side
too subtle
to be taken seriously
to be whole
A lovely person
not a loveable man
a fun child
not a great partner
All these things
lay around me
memories of you
in a silent room
mocking my soul
reminding me
Im half a man.
7/6/09
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Re: Half a Man
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by elle on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 05:27:08 AM AEST
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I'm sitting here having one seriously decadent cup of java (whip creme & the works) thinking. . . wow, this is some strong stuff in this poem.
My gran-pappy used to call it good practice, to get knocked down (repeatedly) & to get back up (running). Always go with your highest
thought. . . maybe instead of being less than, you are simply too much for the average girl. Seems to me, that you may need to hold out
& wait for a truly special individual. Society speculates that we should be attached but I think failure arises when we come together
with others too quickly & call it love before we really know & understand them. It's ok to love just don't loose sight of yourself. . . cheers.
Great poem, by the way. smiling. elle |
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