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Captivated
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 08:25:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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And yes she is on my mind
How can I release such a find
If only but a blink in time
She remains a valuable rhyme
Her sweet voice and loving soul
Just a whisper I lose control
Nothing matters without her desire
She is not the spark she is the fire
I am captivated in her surround
She is the love I have found
Upon her beauty I will always stare
For nothing else could ever compare
Tuesday, 9 June 2009
10:56:43
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Re: Captivated
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 08:46:21 PM AEST
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nice write
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Re: Captivated
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 04:40:11 AM AEST
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Wooo!! I sense love is in the air!!
Lovely write...
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