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I Bleed
Contributed by
recyclebin
on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 08:41:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Plummeting through
A hole in the sky
Submerged,
drowning in salted tears.
I stab myself,
Inflicted self wounds,
Piercing of the blade
Into the flesh.
Im tormented
With my own fate.
I smell my own
grief,
I taste my own
Bitter words.
I tear myself,
Ripped open for the
World to see.
I try to disguise the pain,
Twisting a tourniquet around
My frail heart.
Bleeding profusely,
The stains,
Smear a lifetime of hurt.
I dont know why,
I want to die.
I wake up today,
Just to witness the reflected
Scars left behind.
I hide behind
Believing lies,
That Im fine.
Reaching out, grasping
save me from this abyss
Look beyond these eyes
Soulful cries that cannot express.
I bleed,
and I dont even know
The reason Why.
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recyclebin
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Re: I Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 09:30:38 PM AEST
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Wow, graphic and from a dark scary place. Nicely done.
Tim
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Re: I Bleed
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 08:37:11 PM AEST
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Bin, honey... This is such a gripping and
gut-wrenching write and I can relate, all
too well, unfortunately. It's a scary, dark
and deceiving place to exist in. I've lived
there. I almost died there. This is a
brave and fear-filled write and I applaud
you for getting it down on paper, as it were.
Be well,
~dawn |
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