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The Window
Contributed by
Kaspere
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Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 04:58:09 AM in AEST
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The Window Makes Me Reminisce, Of inner feelings that I cant repress, once lively and hope filled now my soul is floating with the rest, everything ended in a midst, worlds became shattered by falling objects, made from scratch to eliminate threats, now the threats are the dead, blood fills the rivers everywhere you go, the truth be told, it ended out cold.
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Re: The Window
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by thumper on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 10:42:10 PM AEST
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I can relate to this write. Keep on trying, as you write more, the better your writing gets. I am a trial and error person also. But I find that the more I try, sometimes the better I get. That's just me, though. Kudos! Good write.
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