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Kaspere
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Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 05:00:17 AM in AEST
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Books, filled to the brim with knowledge, for those who are foolish, the written word was corrected by the head, the one who has no hearth , for the world is build to abolish, your inner most thoughts, once you express yourself and think, they say that you need a shrink, they try to dispose the problem, and you fail to follow, cause you will newer follow, newer be hollow.
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Re: Books
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by smith2267 on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 09:48:09 AM AEST
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Ok, I think I get it. You are saying that waht you express in your writing will be "corrected" by society, they will say you are crazy, and your true innermost thoughts will be lost, right?
That's a GREAT theme, i LOVE it!
But, don't make yourpoetry so obscure that no one but you gets it...I had to work to get that much out of it. |
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