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The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong
Contributed by
ell_03
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Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 06:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Perfection seemed so much better,
When it belonged to me.
Beauty seemed so much more desirable,
Before it belonged to she.
Humor seemed so much funnier,
When it was I who smiled.
Age seemed of no importance,
Before it deemed me a child.
Words seemed so much more enticing,
When they were telling me I was the one.
Intellegence seemed so much more valuable,
Before it turned to she who had none.
All these things seemed like they were there for me,
When I thought we had a chance together.
He seemed like everything I ever wanted,
Before he left me forever.
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ell_03
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2009-06-09 18:16:16]
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Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong
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by Inevitable on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 06:43:36 PM AEST
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There's definitely a lot going on in this poem.
It was well written and quite expressive.
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Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 08:04:40 PM AEST
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Lovely write... I enjoyed the style....
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Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
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A very poignant piece of work
Sometimes our own mind convinces us that something or someone is right for us, when all the evidence suggests they are wrong
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Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 03:29:57 AM AEST
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very good
Take care |
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