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renewable energy source
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 07:00:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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teardrops fallen. . . evaporate I've stayed too long within myself
lingering dwelling
don't come closer. . . don't reach or I'll have to recede
wait until the end of the song. . . it's all or nothing
it's only me. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-06-09 19:00:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: renewable energy source
(User Rating: 1 ) by one-curly-fry on
Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 07:03:30 PM AEST (User
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Sounds a lot like the place where I am nowadays.. Over the pain and silent. Too fearful and/or no longer used to it to allow others to get close... And I like the last two stanzas.. Strong, resolute finish. Short and beautifully direct. Regardless of it all, your still here and that's all that matters.
Another great write Elle!
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