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Amsterdam
Contributed by
gusbarney
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Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 04:37:27 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Couldn't see her eyes through the glare of the red light,
darkness in a foreign city but the kids are alright.
drowning, in the bitumen alleyways, 2 k's, from our hostel room
tripping, in a dutch gay bar, so far from where the night began
Chewing gum made patterns on the pavement that night,
and if our friends could have seen us oh what a sight
purchasing, powder from a street vendor, drug bender, turned out to be washing detergent
walking, the red light district windows, sex shows, epitomy of window shopping
Paying ten euros for a beer, the money is tight,
hiding from clowns in the small bar they gave us a fright
chasing, an imaginary comet, fluorescent vomit, in the bushed by the path
panicking, in the cab home, too stoned, to pay the taxi fare
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2009-06-11 04:37:27]
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Re: Amsterdam
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by theurbanpoet on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 04:45:07 AM AEST
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| I really dont know what too think....its either absolutely fantastic or just a tale of a very good night out.....however i do like the use of words. I look forward too reading more from you. |
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