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I won't give up today
Contributed by
bluethewolf
on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 11:07:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Though I sit in this corner with my voice,
it laughing at me inside my head,
I won't give up today
Though I'm caged and being poked at with a stick,
I won't submit and simply obey,
I won't give up today
Though I know I can't sooth the pain,
and though it grows thicker each day,
I won't just lay down and die
Though my breath gets heavier and it's harder to breathe,
I refuse to let this be all I'll ever have,
I won't just lay down and die
Though there's no joy in this place and no life,
I will not let myself feel beaten,
I won't live like this
Though there's no hope and no reason to push on,
I can't just hate myself and remain in this realm,
I won't live like this
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2009-06-11 11:07:11]
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Re: I won't give up today
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by mase on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 12:08:03 PM AEST
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Inspirational, keeping your head high through all troubles.
keep them coming and keep us going! |
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Re: I won't give up today
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by redsleeve on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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very emotional writing. great job. keep your head up. thanks for sharing
red |
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