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Thunder Storms Magic
Contributed by
newtopoetry
on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 02:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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pitter patter
tin roofs
neighbors outside dancing
singing in the rain in my favorite rain boots
drip drop
a leak in the ceiling
a bucket of water
filled to the brim with god's tears
boom crash
a lightshow in the perpetually dark sky
a flash of lighting...
gone in a millisecond
flash of a camera
a moment in time
Copyright ©
newtopoetry
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2009-06-12 14:00:21]
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Re: Thunder Storms Magic
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:48:32 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. You truly capture the magic of a thunderstorm. |
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Re: Thunder Storms Magic
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 01:11:27 PM AEST
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Well done! Good choice of words...
Jenni |
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Re: Thunder Storms Magic
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by elle on
Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 08:17:18 AM AEST
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| nicely done. you took me along with you. peace. elle |
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