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Slightly Torn

Contributed by SunRaise on Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 01:09:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Feeling slightly torn & blue, god only knows what Im suppose to do, aint no way I can love you, if you wont let me

I certainly care for you thats for sure, is that so hard to see?

Push, kick, push, kick, is what youve been doing, trying to run away from this undeniable love. Push, shove, push, and shove.

Dont you know love like this comes from up above?

Sweet beginning, mm how sweet it was, like melting chocolate in ones mouth. Those blissful moments I cherish.

Bitter middle, not as sweet as chocolate, disagreeing here & there. But still that divine love lied somewhere.

Sour ending, so sour, brought tears to my eyes, just as a lemon would, but nothing compared to the tears your words could.

When did your heart go missing? How do I find that old heart that thumped when we spoke?

Where did that man go? The one I couldnt wait to see once I was woke?

Where did you go? When will you be back?

I do not wish to wait long, patience is what I lack.

Copyright © SunRaise ... [ 2009-06-13 13:09:53]
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