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Time, the cruel beast
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Sunday, 14th June 2009 @ 06:53:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Time is relentless
when you wish
the kiss would last
the pain to pass quick
time moves on
like the benign river
at its own pace
with its own fate
You tell me Im strange
now I want simple things
for the sense of apathy
for a void of empathy
Im tired of being real
surrounded by images of people
that feel the cheapest things
and know the smallest hope
Time is relentless
a cruel and heartless beast
promising only a cold death
promising endless obscurity
I hope to be free
never to love again
not to be dragged in times wake
torn on the careless rocks.
14/6/09
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Re: Time, the cruel beast
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by Lele on
Sunday, 14th June 2009 @ 05:25:46 PM AEST
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The time doesn't forgive us about your fate. I was writing a poem about this theme, but considering her as a sado owner of me, who is hurt by her whips.
I like your poem.
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Re: Time, the cruel beast
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 14th June 2009 @ 09:00:31 PM AEST
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| Great poem! |
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