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Getting by you
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 05:42:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You told me
from such an innocent age
to accept you
and sit in that self-hatred cage
youd tell me I wasnt good
youd tell me I would fail
Did you like
that time Id place another burn?
Would you smile
knowing it was only from you Id learn?
and Id stay chained by that
and Id remain but an animal
Its a hard road
to move passed you and your trial
but I see it now
to this cage, I do have a file
I can get by your whip
I can be happy, if alone
You trained me well
twenty nine before I thought of myself
at least, if I have no-one
Ill still have a chance with my health
there is a chance to move on
there is hope for me yet.
16/6/09
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Re: Getting by you
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 12:56:01 PM AEST
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i can relate to this some what.. i wish i didnt and that you didnt feel this because its terrible.
the poem itself was well constructed and i enjoyed its flow..
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