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You Hold My Strings So Coldly
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 02:44:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Lately I feel sick and hollow
my mind on fire, my heart bleeding out
I walk blindly, lacking an incentive to follow
bathed in moonlight, comprised of doubt
You treat me like a rag doll
your voice so cold and cruel
Do you love me at all?
Or am I just a fool?
I sit here and smoke in silence
you and I, we're miles apart
but the distance doesn't break the violence
your words invite inside my heart
my windowless eyes are dreaming a disaster
because I am the puppet and you are the master.
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Inevitable
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2009-06-16 14:44:23]
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Re: You Hold My Strings So Coldly
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 12:34:54 PM AEST
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it flowed very impressively, well put together, good job.
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