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Sultanas
Contributed by
Sparkles
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nobody likes me
Everybody hates me
Im gonna go and eat some worms
Or alternatively I do it another way
A way that makes me feel
A way that makes me hate myself
A way that makes it real
Some people are bulimic
They make themselves real sick
But I do it another way
A way that gives a kick
And I know how it sounds
And I know its really bad
But its the only way I see to cope
When Im feeling sad
I cant explain what its like
When I see the blood come pouring
Its like the pain has been released
But the adrenalin is soaring
I wake up in the morning
And see where its started to scab
I feel so ***** ashamed of myself
I feel so ***** bad
I feel I cant tell anyone
I hide it from my friends
I say I walked into things
I lie until it mends
But it never really goes away
There will always be a scar
This is just a shout out to people
Where ever you are
That you are not the only one
That goes through all this pain
I know what you may be going through
And I promise it will be ok
Everyone has there ways
Of getting through hard times
And as long as ure not killing yourself
You will be just fine
Copyright ©
Sparkles
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2003-03-28 12:45:00]
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Re: Sultanas
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 02:04:41 PM AEST
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| So sad that you feel you can talk to no one. Well my friend...those days are though. Sometimes it's easier to talk to a stranger so I offer you the hand of friendship if you want to take it. If you need to talk, send me a private message. I know all about sadness and feeling all alone. Also...for a first poem, you managed to convey your feelings very well. Well done! :o) Larry |
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Re: Sultanas
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by Dreama on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 09:05:13 AM AEST
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you can get hurt a lot of ways without dying, but do a lot of damage! this poem opened my eyes! i feel great sadness and sympathy for you. but why would you want to give yourself scars? how does self harm help?
but now i know, my eyes are open, and my heart reaches out to you.
i hope you feel you are no longer alone |
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Re: Sultanas
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by perfection on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:34:17 PM AEST
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That is a very, very great write for your first poem! You expressed emotion very well!
But in other terms, do you cut, or is it just something you wanted to write about? Just know that you are never alone!!
xoxo
Sarah |
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