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Inside My Head Is A Mental Racetrack
Contributed by
debi-x3
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Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 09:21:54 AM in AEST
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Mental Racetrack
Going Faster Going Faster
Rhythmic Rhythmic
Like a heartbeat
Perhaps a train
NO FOCUS
Flit from one to the next
Staring Staring
Uncomprehending
Listening intently.
But no hearing
Change of pattern
Can't be done
Track, track, fast track
Speeding
Blurred and Blank.
Rhyme and Reason
out the door
or different?
No sense
Nonsense
CHAOS
Slow
Why can't
Stop.
Copyright ©
debi-x3
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2009-06-17 09:21:54]
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Re: Inside My Head Is A Mental Racetrack
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 09:48:00 AM AEST
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I get this poem
but in my head is you naked ;)
Love you debi,You inspire me so much btw. |
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Re: Inside My Head Is A Mental Racetrack
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 03:35:59 PM AEST
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It's very good. I can relate to this style of writing because it bears similarities with my own. I love the element of repetition and almost nonchalant alliteration.
-Phil |
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