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Fountain Pen of Tears
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 04:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The ink of sorrow flows in a chaotic river of thought;
the pain in each tear will never be forgotten.
This pen is the tool of pained art;
the ink is tears of my tortured heart.
This pen has a mind of its own;
my hands only need to roam.
The ideas are captured in each and every drop;
The words together create life's backdrop.
This fountain pen is a tool of magic;
The ink drying to death would be tragic.
For a fountain pen of tears should have eternal life;
this pen is a way to end strife.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-06-17 16:10:02]
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Re: Fountain Pen of Tears
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by mase on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 05:40:15 PM AEST
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| The title caught my attention and I wasn't disappointed, very nice |
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Re: Fountain Pen of Tears
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by Kyler on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 07:49:34 PM AEST
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| Very creative, I like the concept and everything flows very well together! Nice job! |
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Re: Fountain Pen of Tears
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 09:43:39 PM AEST
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This is realy good and oh so true.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Fountain Pen of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 12:35:52 PM AEST
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it had great fluency, nice work.
-Phil |
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Re: Fountain Pen of Tears
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by theurbanpoet on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 03:50:49 PM AEST
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| Truly wonderful poem! The title caught my eye..... the poem is outstanding... raw yet incredibly powerful!! |
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