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USED
Contributed by
JAMIEAG27
on
Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 02:42:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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ALL THIS HATE BOILS INSIDE OF ME
BUT I HIDE IT WITH A SMILE SO NO ONE CAN SEE.
I HATE THIS LIFE THAT I HAVE TO LIVE
I HATE PEOPLE TAKING WHEN I GIVE, GIVE, GIVE.
THEY TAKE MY HEART AND THROW IT DOWN
AND WHEN I NEED HELP THEY'RE NEVER AROUND.
THEY USE ME UNTIL I HAVE NOTHING LEFT INSIDE
EVERYTHING STRIPPED AWAY, EVEN MY PRIDE.
AND WHEN I TRY TO HIDE TO LICK MY WOUNDS AWAY
SOMEONE NEEDS ME AND WANTS ME TO STAY.
OF COURSE I'LL SMILE AND SAY "ALL RIGHT"
AND YET AGAIN I'VE LOST THE FIGHT
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JAMIEAG27
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2009-06-18 02:42:47]
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Re: USED
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by Richard1506 on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 03:46:01 AM AEST
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I hope the fact that you use capital letters all the time is to emphasize the message. It actually makes it more difficult to read, but you sound as if you are frustrated, but hiding it.
If this poem represents your actual state of mind, please get help. I would hate to miss your beautiful, profound verse. |
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Re: USED
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 10:24:50 AM AEST
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This poems has a great flow to it
well thought out and well written.
I had to read it twice once to myself
then the second time out loud
because the caps say READ OUT LOUD!!!!!! |
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