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The End
Contributed by
Bizzy
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 04:49:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Today I spoke to an aged friend.
She's complained for years about the life she's in.
She pines and whines for what might have been.
I think she stopped living
before she came to the end.
G.F.R. Coykendall, October 15, 1995
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Bizzy
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2003-03-28 16:49:06]
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Re: The End
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by kolbrun on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:17:37 AM AEST
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A priceless poem, Bizzy, (for one with such a pen-name.) lol.... Seriously, this is an exceptional write....there should be more like you around the world...
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Re: The End
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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Thank you, kolbrun, for the comment on The End... and your comment about my pen-name! Its not very glamorous, is it? So... I don't have to 'be' glamorous. Well, what about kolbrun, how did you come by that one?
Busy= Bizzy |
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Re: The End
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by bernard on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:11:12 PM AEST
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| Thank you for this poem it expresses what many elderly people do. They just give up before their life is at an end.By the way Ilike your pen name Bizzy, I can imagine that you are a busy person by the poems that you have written. I will be back for more have a great life from bernard. |
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