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Contributed by
kro3291
on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 09:20:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I watched my tears
As they hit the ground
No one noticces
Don't make a sound
The silent rain
Rolls down my face
Everything feels
So out of place
You don't know
Don't have a clue
What I gave
To be with you
My eyes go blurry
I can't see
I just can't
Can't let you be
I was there
Never ley you down
Now I feel
Like a stupid clown
Tears well up
Won't let them fall
Until the day
That you don't call
Do you remember
Our song, you'd say
I wanna hold you high
And steal your pain away
All those times
We talked so late
We never thought
Heartbreak was fate
I gave it my all
Not like you cared
I try not to remember
The secrets we shared
I still remember
Every word you said
Your voice is ringing
Still inside my head
You said forever
Just another lie
When i was with you
I thought I could fly
But you took my wings
And ripped them in two
And after all this
I still love you
I think back
To those happier days
We Were in love
In so many ways
I hated to wake up
From those perfect dreams
I guess everything
Isn't as it seems
All those nights
I cried myself to sleep
That's what I get
For falling so deep
Eight whole monthes
Flew by so fast
I rreally thought
We would last
All our memories
Insidemy head
Now I can see
What we had to dread
Did you even care?
Did you really love me?
I think you did
An idiot could see
I can't move on
Can't forget you
Without you
i don't know what to do
You're gorgeous and funny
You're sweet and smart
And you're the guy
That broke my heart
We started talking
I want you back
We can be great again
Get back on track
Now you like me
Won't ask me out
That one fact
Just makes me doubt
Should I do It?
Should I try?
All this confusion
I want to cry
I saw you
Just the other day
I put on a fake smile
And walked away
You're all I think of
All I see
In my eyes
You're perfect as can be
I miss my boyfriend
My carebear
All this drama
Too much to bare
Me and you
You and me
Just think of all
We can be
And after all this
Is you want to
I'd take you back
Because I LOVE YOU!
Copyright ©
kro3291
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2009-06-22 09:20:23]
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Re: You
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 04:32:09 PM AEST
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You told me my poem made yours look like trash
I have to disagree I liked this poem very much.
It's a great poem the only thing I would change would be some grammar but I can't judge on that I make enough grammar mistakes for everyone
but great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: You
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by Darin on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 06:57:46 PM AEST
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| From the heart. I like it! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: You
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by Dillybar on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 08:23:23 PM AEST
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| i really like it a lot i can tell it came from the heart and i would suggest some grammar too. keep writing pretty good. |
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