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Unholy
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 02:10:58 AM in AEST
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I honestly like what I have here. My only problem was in which order to put the stanzas because it sounds better in some ways then others. But this is what I came up with I hope you like it and if you think it should be in a different order please tell.
Unholy thats what I am
A degenerate of the damned
Im a lowlife no one wants to know
Wheres man like me to go
Straight down to hell
Thats where they tell me my soul will have fell
All because Im not the same
All because they think Im insane
They tell me Im hell bound
That not even god wants me around
All because Im not the same
All because they think Im insane
So what if I dont fit in
Its not a sin
Im proud
Ill say it loud
Unholy is what you want me to be
Im fine with that so Ill show you and let you see
That Im unholy thats what I am
Im a degenerate of the damned
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-06-23 02:10:58]
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Re: Unholy
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by GlenDavid on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 03:14:12 AM AEST
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| hey love this poem, dont let them change you keep following your own path and keep up with the writing! |
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