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soul to soul
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 09:15:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If we embrace a concept
as a belief system
then, randomly
it becomes true for us
though lacking in validity. . .
thus the lesson begins.
I feel we may share some of the same lessons.
dare I still believe
you to be my beloved
long for your memory
to linger. . .
sweet, yet
so bittersweet.
my mind, unable
to spit you out.
my mouth, always
wanting to kiss you. . .
taste you. . . call you mine.
I try to recall
each nuance
of the very heart you.
still only a memory. . .
I want you.
my soul will recognize your soul
for ever after
& hold dear,
without shame. . .
no doubts, no shadows
only clarity
of distinction
slowly. . . gently
. . . acknowledging
all I ever
loved of you.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-06-26 21:15:01]
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Re: soul to soul
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 04:56:19 PM AEST
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very powerful writing, good work.
-Phil |
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Re: soul to soul
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by Mars on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 06:18:05 AM AEST
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Facing some recent events in my life, this matches very, very closely to how I feel right now. My 'The Lady Moon' was based on the same thing. Bittersweet, however, is probably the best way to describe it. Then again, love is like a hunger. When you loose what has been satisfying you, you starve.
That might even make a good poem... |
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Re: soul to soul
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by venkat on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 10:36:55 PM AEST
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| Ah.. it is crystal clear, what you still feel in your soul..love is a plant of life. It sees all seasons. Let a new spring visit your garden. :-) venkat |
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Re: soul to soul
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by WraithX on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 12:45:52 PM AEST
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| Love is a powerful emotion, probably the most dangerous one, very impressive writing. |
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Re: soul to soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 06:35:29 PM AEST
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Okay, hopefully I won't get that 500 thingy again.
Your poetry is consistently inspiring and always provokes much thought in me.
Especially this line:
my soul will recognize your soul
Makes me wonder if lost loves' souls meet in the after death and if so, then what?
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Re: soul to soul
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 10:36:33 PM AEST
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full of longing and loss, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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