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One fine Evening
Contributed by
girish
on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 07:50:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Its a pleasant breeze and a fine evening
The Sky as girl feels shy and starts leaning
Is seen wearing a different costume
With the gentle breeze and a fine tune
Thousands of colours adorn the appearance
If its night you can see the magnificence
The sky lays the bridge to this brilliant night
The birds enchant music adding to the flight
Plants with flowers add to the pleasant breeze
Making the sky lean to it and then freeze
This beautiful sky adds to my growing wisdom
Everyday this pleasure relieves us from boredom
People accross the world will all act very fair
The day this would happen is not afar
The world will soon answer all my queries
That will add stuff to the existing theories
This day its very pleasant and fine evening
To be here my mind has a strong yearning
To see the sky with its beautiful wearing
Alas! Tell me if its real and I am not dreaming
Copyright ©
girish
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2009-06-28 07:50:10]
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Re: One fine Evening
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 01:00:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece of writing. I love the imagery used. I will never see the sky the same way again.
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Re: One fine Evening
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 12:46:29 AM AEST
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Well if you're dreaming then I am too.
Beautifull write and sceanary.
Huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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