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So Much For Dad
Contributed by
bteddybear23
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Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 04:03:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So Much For Dad
Even though I've never met you I dream of you alot Staring at the ceiling laying on my cot My new dad drinks and screams and tells me I'm not his Somtimes I wish so hard that I was another kid
We read your letters when they come and mother says you care Why cant you get your act together and rescue us from here Other families whisper when we go out to the store Why cant those people be around when mothers on the floor Rarely do I see my mother smile out of joy She smiles just to comfort me her scared and crying boy Blood and bruises screams of rage for many years to come You were released five years ago we dont know where you've gone
We moved away from that nightmare with not a hand from you If I ever see your face I don't know what I'll do I have a child of my own and I dont know how you live Since I watched her take a breath all I can do is give
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Re: So Much For Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 06:19:19 PM AEST (User
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This is really sad but so well written... Your emotions shine through this poem..
Great write...Sorry you are going through this..
Jenni |
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Re: So Much For Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 08:53:26 PM AEST (User
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Great piece of writing. I feel your pain in the poem. I hope things improve for you and life brings you happiness. Again wonderful write.
---Heidi |
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