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Blue
Contributed by
lettsdothiis
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Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 01:41:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You feel the waves between your toes and under your feet.
You feel your hair blow with the wind.
Your eyes fill with the blueness and the sparkle you see before you.
But it's when this bliss surrounds you that it's pulled from under you.
That's when you feel yourself drowning.
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Re: Blue
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 02:26:12 PM AEST
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Nice imagery here. I feel like I am within this poem seeing the blue water and being overcome by it. Thanks for sharing this piece!
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Re: Blue
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 28th July 2015 @ 06:30:09 AM AEST
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| Very creative write! |
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