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Beyond the color blue
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 04:26:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Gut me while the flesh is still fresh
Suffocate me while my breath is warm
Squeeze me until the blood would drip less
And feed me to the longing swarm
I've heard a lot of gossip trash
Each word just another meaningless lash
But only one thing said was true:
I am beaten, beyond the color blue
I lay here in a pool of flaking red
A drop that tastes of metal on my tongue
I do hope your lust is, truly, now fed
For there is no more to which I could possibly succumb
I am beaten, beyond the color blue
I am defeated, because of you
I wish you could see what you have done
But it's hidden behind the curtain, it was just for fun
Copyright ©
MissTeenSuicide
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2009-07-06 16:26:34]
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Re: Beyond the color blue
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 06:32:03 AM AEST
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| I especially love the flow and wording of the first stanza. |
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Re: Beyond the color blue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:38:18 AM AEST
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Again, it's very well constructed. Good stuff.
-Phil |
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Re: Beyond the color blue
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 10:27:41 AM AEST
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Wow I like this one, it has an
awesome evil twist to it. I'm
a sucker for sickening love
poems :P
But well done! |
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