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Love in Ink
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 07:25:52 AM in AEST
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I hold my pen
like I could never hold a woman
with the passion of the endless
on the brake of new dawn
to take the moment
and make history
paint a reality for us both
in love of what we create
something rich and honest
something real
I hold this pen
desire rich in my veins
life without limitations
life without regret
I hold meaning in this pen
something that lacks
in the arms of apparent love
the temptation of fulfilment
the meaning of my existence
something Her love cant bring.
8/7/09
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2009-07-08 07:25:52]
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Re: Love in Ink
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 11:08:56 AM AEST
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| I love this poem. You show the power of the poet's tool and describe how no limitations exist with the bond between the tool and the poet. Great Job! Amazing actually! |
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Re: Love in Ink
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 04:47:10 AM AEST
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It's good to see some Australian poetry on here; it is an Australian site after all lol This was very good indeed, very thoughtful and eloquent.
-Phil |
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Re: Love in Ink
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by elle on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 06:41:30 AM AEST
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I love this. . . love the concept & especailly the line "with the passion of the endless"
it speaks volumes. smiles. . .elle |
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