|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Frayed Heart Strings
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 03:19:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
|
Bleeding their last drops, my heart strings dangle with pain, damaged split-end art
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-07-08 15:19:17] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Frayed Heart Strings
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 04:32:02 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yes, the traditional 5-7-5 scheme is always the best. This was very good indeed.
-Phil
|
|
|
Re: Frayed Heart Strings
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 11:09:37 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good work on this, and it is very sad.
Hugs
Michelle |
|
|
|