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Socializing With My Love
Contributed by
Sisha
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Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 10:44:05 PM in AEST
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I missed a line but couldn't escape my character
So I stayed nodding and besides stage hides mere actor
But the narrator too was behind the curtains
So she's like screw you, i do have an audience
She snapped at me all raw
like my dumbshow wouldn't beat her vocals anymore
But i clapped her cheek in awe
as she ended 'so stop pretending and behave like a social animal'
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Sisha
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2009-07-08 22:44:05]
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Re: Socializing With My Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 04:25:08 AM AEST
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Good, unique writing. Excellent for a first post, more to come I hope.
-Phil
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